Audience feedback from Animatic Presentation

For my animatic presentation I debriefed my my animatic presentation to the class, telling them all the shots and what they consisted of, this is including; the angles, action, the dialogue and the reasons behind them. And alos telling them the storyline.

My music video is about a girl who was formally dating a boy, then they broke up. And though out out this video we are going to see her reaction and how she deals with it. This is shown by the music video being narrative. The girl originally starts of on her bed and crying, this is shown in stop motion. The next shot is a flash back showing the couple together, but showing possessiveness. Then seeing them walking home then they being to have an argument with each other, then the next shot is both of their close up to show their reaction and emotion to it. After this, there is a shot of her being left behind while he walks a way from her but also the relationship. Then we see them in a classroom with the dated music and jus showing them in a happy place. Then we she her returning to her room and the stop motion begins again.

In this section we see a spilt screen shot mostly, this is used to show the reaction of the boy and the girl. This is where we can start to see the obsessiveness being shown by her calling him and he not answering. The a close up of pictures to add to the effect

Positive Feedback:

1. The element which was part of my music video that people liked the most was that the element of emotion and vulnerability was shown thought out. This with the close up of their faces and the time of music with the actions


2. Also they also liked the part of the music where the musical would be shown in black and white to show a flash back, they said it was effective because when they were together it was like a life time away. With this feedback, it allows me to think of trying to put more of different types of elements into and by taking that risk will allow us to be more confident.



3. Also, when asking people what they felt what the music video was about, they all came up with mostly different meanings, which was what one of the main aims was about. One person said it was mainly about being obsessed with a boy, another said that it was mainly about thinking your in love and another said, that girls need to be more stronger and less dependent
   


4. With the element of having split screen in the shot, it shows both characters reaction and not just the main character, this shows the other feelings of the character, thus also relating to more people. Also, having a different shot type allowed it to be more dynamic.
   

Negative Feedback

1. They said that there was not a variety shots which was shown,it was not rich enough and we needed to incorporate more into the music video, by doing this we are more able add more emotion and fright into the video and also a more of a chance for people to relate to the video.
   


2. They also realised that some of the shots were too long, and this makes the viewer lose interest and begin to start to get bored. So to make it more interesting we are going to add more shots and more variety to it.


3. There was alot of confusion with the order of shots because of the back and forth action with them being happy and then them arguing and breaking up, which almost let them baffled.