Wednesday, 17 November 2010

Feedback- first edited draft

In class I had present my first draft of my music video to my fellow classmates and say what they liked and disliked about my music video

Negatives:
  • Most of the shots used in the music video were longer in comparison with the beat of the music, so to improve this, making a scene with her singing the music in a different setting could be used within the longer shots
  • Some of the shot the actors come out of the shot slightly, and it was said that it loses impact on the action thought the shots
  • Also, during the arguing shots, the use of close ups would be better, because its shows more emotion and action in the music video.
  • We should make the part where we first used the spilt screen shot and use it for a longer period of time

Positives:

  • They like the black and white scenes, they said that it was humorous and really effective to show that what was filmed was a very long time ago, almost a life time away.
  • Also, they really enjoyed the editing techniques used in the frame, it was very dramatic and creative
  • Another point was that they like the stop motion used at the end, it was really effective in showing the uneasiness and the addiction in her.
  • Also, they liked the shot in the bathroom where she is singing, the part that they enjoyed the most was the use of the mirror to show her reflection

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