Feedbacks on music video digipak

We had to present our ideas for our music video digipak, last lesson we had to make a daft, as below, and then we presented it the to the class.

The feedback:

1. Good illustration shows good visual effect, this showed them that we knew we exactly what we wanted each side to look like
2. Each of the images showed significant stages in her life which links to the video
3. The cracked Cd portrayed the broken heart of the girl
4. The use of the black and white showed loneliness and depression. Her eyes are closed shows that she is in her own world
5. They liked the contrast of colour with the black and white pictures, this shows the contrast of her emotions.
6. The Cd cover fits in well with the RnB genre, this is because typically they have the close up of the artist making it look emotional
7. They think we need to mainpulate our images more, this is because it needs to stand out more